Innovative business idea

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In my opinion, the mini wind-turbine should get first prize for the idea which is most environmentally friendly. Nowadays natural resources are exploited too much and can end in the future. We have to find alternative resources of energy. This idea is based on wind energy and doesn’t cause any pollution.
The interactive website should be awarded by second prize for the idea which makes best use of information and communication technology. Thanks to it small companies can fast and easy communicate with their suppliers and customers. It is quite cheap and use the newest technology. It enables to do quite safe business via the Internet.
niektóre zdania są u Ciebie porawne, a to co wpisuje to moje propozycje :))

the mini wind-turbine should BE AWARDED THE FIRT PRIZE FOR THE MOST ENVIRONMENTALLY FRIENDLY IDEA.


Nowadays natural
>resources are EXTENSIVELY EXPLOITED WHICH MAY LEAD TO THEIR TOTAL EXPLOITATION IN THE NEAREST FUTURE

website should be awarded second prize (BEZ 'BY')

Thanks to it small companies can fast and easy communicate with their
>suppliers and customers. - This idea makes it possible/easier for the companies to communicate more effectively (or: easier and much faster)


It enables to do quite safe business via the Internet. - it renders the business via Internet much safer
Dzieki wielkie za wskazówki :)

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