bardzo prosze sprawdzcie :(((((

moja notatka-wypowiedz na temat spotrow extremalnych ..

Some people like spend their free time on the beach, watching tv or reading. Others quickly get bored and they prefer more active ways of spending their leisure hours. Extrime sports like bungee jumping, sky diving, moutain bike riging are deadly dangerous and they prove how much a man is worth. Somebody do it to test their abilities or arise adrenaline level. Mabe that when they have once tried then they never want to stop. Dangerous sports are very addictive they are like drugs for the brave. People do it beacuse it helps them to forget about their problems. It makes theit life hallenging adventurous but never boring and i think its a secret of it..

>Some people like SPENDING their free time on the beach, watching tv or
>reading. ANOTHER quickly gets bored and they prefer more active ways of
>spending their leisure hours. ExtrEme sports, like bungee jumping, sky
>diving, moutain bike riging are deadly dangerous and they prove how
>much (bez 'a')man is worth. Somebody IS DOING it to test their abilities or arise
>adrenaline level. MabY when they have once tried then(niepotrzebne 'then') never
>want to stop. Dangerous sports are very addictive it's like drugs
>(bez tego). People do it beacuse it helps them to forget about
>their problems. It makes their life Challenging adventurous but never
>boring and I think it's a secret...

babyBoi - nie poprawiaj, bo robisz to źle

>>Some people like SPENDING their free time on the beach, watching
>tv or
>>reading. Others quickly get bored and (they) prefer more active
>ways of
>>spending their leisure hours. ExtrEme sports, like bungee jumping,
>sky
>>diving, moutain bike riging are deadly dangerous and they prove
>how
>>much (bez 'a')man is worth. Somebody does it to test his
>abilities or arise
>>adrenaline level. Maybe when he has tried once, then he'll never
>>want to stop. Dangerous sports are very addictive, just like drugs. People do it beacuse it helps them to forget about
>>their problems. It makes their life Challenging adventurous but
>never
>>boring and I think it's a secret...

Maybe when he tried once - tak miało być

moze byc tez "Some people like TO SPEND their free time..." prawda ?

a czemu tam poprawiliscie na "IS DOING" ?