Proszę o sprawdzenie 3 zdan.

If my house was on fire I would save my box with souvenirs and photos because it mean a lot for me and remind me the best moments in my life. Second I would save not thing but animal, my cat because I get attached to him. Also I take out all documents because they are necessary and to form new its difficult and it takes a lot of time.

Bardzo proszę mi to sprawdzic, czy dobrze przetłumaczyłam,,,z góry dziekuję.
Z okazji Twoich urodzin, w imieniu klas IV – VI pragniemy złożyć Ci najserdeczniejsze życzenia. Życzymy Ci, żebyś był zawsze zdrowy, szczęśliwy i zadowolony. Niech spełnią ci się najskrytsze marzenia!
Niech Pan Bóg Ci błogosławi.
On the occasion of your birthday, on behalf of the classes I - III, we wish you my best wishes. We wish you always healthy, happy and satisfied. Let you meet your deepest wishes. May God bless you.

>>> w imieniu klas IV – VI ...
...On the occasion of your birthday, on behalf of 'the' (niepotr) classes 'I - III' (ale w polskiej wersji masz klase IV-VI-dlaczego zmienilas?) , we 'wish' (daj tutaj GIVE) you 'my' (OUR-bo przeciez to jest l. mn) best wishes. We wish you 'always healthy' (nie, nie tak, HEALTH), 'happy' HAPPINESS and 'satisfied' SATISFACTION. Let youR 'meet your deepest wishes' (nie, nie tak, to nic nie znaczy - tutaj 'deepest wishes come true').
...May God bless you. (tego to bym nie mowila, bo nie wszyscy wierza w Boga)

If my house was on fire I would save my box with souvenirs and photos because it means a lot for me and reminds me of the best moments in my life. Second I would save not A thing but AN animal - my cat - because I AM attached to him. Also I WOULD take out all documents because they are necessary and to GET new ONES IS difficult and takes a lot of time.

Dziękuję.

If your house was on fire, all you'd be thinking of saving is your ass, not some silly box of souvenirs.

tak tak, koleżanko praktyka to jedno a praca domowa z ang to drugie.
pozdrawiam