Ja bym napisał tak:
Two years ago my family and I flied by plane for our holiday. We
flied from Warsaw to Egipt with a stopover. On the board we had to fasten our seatbelts, a steewardess gave us free meals, drinks and in- flight magazines. There were overhead compartments and lifejackets. My seat was nearly the window, I saw beautiful clouds. I had a possibility to go to the captain's cabin and touch the steering wheel but only for a
few seconds. Before we started the air hostess had shown all passangers
safety instructions, she had also told us how we should act towards plane
>crash. The flight passed fastly and guietly. We got the air
>terminal with delay. Later we went throught the passport control and
>security check. My parents had to pay for extra luggages. After
>the journey by plane we were very hungry so we decided to have dinner. We left our luggages in a luggage lockers. We bought
>tickets for return journey and we went to a four- star hotel.
>I lived with my sister in a double room with a view to the sea and with a
>private bathroom. Many atractions like swimming- pool or fitness
>club were included in the bill.They had great cuisine and the service
>was very nice.
>We bought package tour with travels, meals and busses so we could
>sightsee many interesting places. My parents often went to open-air
>concerts in the evening and they went for long walks but my
>sister and I prefered sunbathing.
>We left Egipt on 22th July and we got back to the Okęcie airport
>on 14th August.
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