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Tom Carter and Nick Andreas have been friends since there were child. They used to help each other in difficult situations and just hang out when everything was right. It seems that nothing could cause that their friendship fall apart. However it wasn’t that perfect because after accusation of hitting his girlfriend Nick stay alone. Tom has not want to talked with him for a long time but finally he wanted to make up with Nick. Nevertheless Nick knows that their friendship won’t be the same as in the past.
Tom will look at his friend through the prism of his father and domestic violence. Nicholas will feel uncomfortable because I suppose that nobody doesn’t expect that their friends will feel pity for him or her. Everyone wants to be treat equal. Moreover Nick is aware that Tom change his opinion about Mr.Andreas and Tom might perceive Nick’s father as a monster.

Tom Carter and Nick Andreas have been friends since 'there' THEY (oni) were childREN (l. mn - bo jest ich 2).
It 'seems' SEEMED (czas przeszly) that nothing could cause 'that' (niepotr) their friendship TO fall apart. However, it wasn’t that perfect because after (brak przedimka) accusation of hitting his girlfriend Nick 'stay' (to jest zle slowo-poszukaj inne) alone. Tom has not wantED to taLK with him for a long time (przecinek) but finally he wanted to make up with Nick.
Nicholas will feel uncomfortable because I suppose that nobody 'doesn’t' (niepotr) expectS that their friends will feel pity for him or her. Everyone wants to be 'treat' TREATED 'equal' (albo 'as equal' albo equally'). Moreover Nick is aware that Tom (tu cos brakuje) change his opinion about Mr.Andreas and Tom might perceive Nick’s father as a monster.