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What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad?

Nowadays, studying abroad is becoming more popular. A lot of people are leaving their country to study foreign universities. However this has both advantages and disadvantages. I want to give the arguments for and against.
Firstly, when we’re abroad we have a chance to improve our language skills. In addition we’ve a possibility to get to know new cultures and customs.
Secondly, it may be easier to found a good job, because employers are looking for people who studied at a good university,
Moreover we can get a better education when we studying foreign university, for example at Oxford or Harvard.
Nevertheless, there are also disadvantages.
Most of all, studying abroad is expensive. The other problem is the language. We wouldn’t understand people if we don’t know his language.
And finally, we can also feel lonely and lost in a new environment. For some people this is a big problem and they return to their homes.
In conlusion, studying abroad has a lot of advantages and disadvantages. However, in my opinion it is worth studying in different country, because we will have a better prospects in future.
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What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad?

Nowadays studying abroad is becoming more popular. A lot of people are leaving their countries to study at foreign universities. However, this has both pros and cons.
Firstly, when we’re abroad we have a chance to improve our language skills. In addition we’ve a possibility to get to know new cultures and customs.
Secondly, it may be easier to found a good job, because employers are looking for people who studied at a good university.
Moreover we can get better education when we study at foreign university, for example at Oxford or Harvard.
Nevertheless, there are disadvantages as well.
Most of all, studying abroad is expensive. The other problem is the language. We won’t understand people if we don’t know that language.
And finally, we can also feel lonely and lost in new environment. For some people this is a big problem and they return home.
In conlusion, studying abroad has a lot of advantages and disadvantages. However, in my opinion it is worth studying in another country because we will have better prospects for the future.


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Secondly, it may be easier to 'found' (prosze poprawic ten czasownik) a good job, because employers are looking for people who studied at a good university.
Moreover we can get better education when we study at (brakuje przedimka) foreign university, for example at Oxford or Harvard.
And finally, we can also feel lonely and lost in (brak przedimka) new environment.


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...because employers are looking for people who studied at a good university.

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who HAVE studied....