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Today, in our modern world a lot of people travel other countries thew the seas, oceans.. Many of us like travelling. It broaden our minds. We feel excited when we go abroad and we see different culture, habits and we hear others languages. People travelling during holidays or even work.
In the past traveled only on foot. Later, started to use donkeys, horses, camels etc. depending the place where they lived.
These days, people are addicted to use different means of transport. Almost nobody travels only on foot. We are able to use bikes and motorbikes, cars, trains, airplanes, helicopters or ships. Thanks for development of technology travels are faster and more pleasantly.
One of the means of transport is car. Its the best way of travelling for man who want to see as many fascinating places as fast as possible. People who making a decision to go by car are indipendent and they can plan their trip themselves. They need not to stand an overcrovded station or waiting for bus on bus station.
Other, also very nice way of travelling is ship. It takes much more time but it gives more opportunities to visit interesting places. Tis expensive and requires more time too.
Going bycoach is cheaper but it is quite uncomfortable.
If you want to get to another country the best way of gettinf there is flay to plane. Airplane flights may seem to be dangerous but they are very safe and milions of people travel by air as it is the quickest way of travelling.
As we are talking about transport we shouldn't forget about bicycles. This mean of transport keep us in close contact with nature and provide good health. They are friendly for enviroment too.
To conclude, nowadays we have really big choice of means of transports. They make the world very small. We are able to go wherever we want, and how we travel depend only on us. We can choose cheeper or expensive journey, slow or fast travel.

Dobra praca, mozesz ja oddac, jest tam pare literowek ale to drobnostka pozdrawiam.

in tehe past travelLed
depend ON sth/sb
addicted TO sth
indEpendent
they DON'T need to stand
overcroWded
this IS expensive
flY BY plane

to tyle co zauwazylam;)

in THE past:)

dziekuje serdecznie:]]

a few ideas:
travel TO, people TRAVEL , it BROADENS ,in the past (people) TRAVELLED, depending ON, addicted to (without use), JOURNEYS (not travels), ARE CARS (sounds better), IT'S (or IT IS), for SOMEONE (not man), who WANTS, to see many (without as), people who ARE making, INDEPENDENT, BY themselves, they DON'T need to stay ON OVERCROWDED station or WAIT for A bus, ALTERNATIVELY, IF YOU WANT TO HAVE MORE OPPORTUNITIES TO VISIT INTERESTING PLACES, IT IS A GOOD IDEA TO USE SHIPS, THIS IS expensive, GETTING there, TAKE A FLIGHT, KEEPS US,PROVIDES, ENVIRONMENT-FRIENDLY, we have A really, means of TRANSPORT, DEPENDS, CHEAPER,

Today, in our modern world a lot of people travel to other countries, even over the seas and oceans. Many of us like travelling. It broadens our minds. We feel excited when we go abroad because we can learn something about different culture, habits and we can hear other languages. People travel during holidays or even when they work. in the past people travelled only on foot. later they started using donkeys, horses, camels and other animals, depending on the place where they lived. Nowadays people are used to using different means of transport. We can use bikes, motorbikes, cars,trains, airplains, helicopters or ships. Thanks to development of technology travelling is faster and more pleasant. one of the means of transport is a car. it is the best way of travelling for someone who wants see many fascinating places in a short period of time. people who make decision to travel by car are independent and they can plan their trip themselves. They don't need to wait in an overcrowde station or wait for a bus. another, also a very nice way of travelling is a ship. it takes much more time to reach the destination of the journey, however it gives more opportunities to visit interesting places. unfortunatelly it is very expensive. the cheaper but quite uncomfortable way of travelling is a coach.
the fastest way of reaching the destination is travelling by plane. it may seem to be dangerous, however millions of people travel by planes.
As we are talking about travelling we can't forget about bicycles. This mean of transport keeps us in a close contact with nature and provides a good health. Bicycles are also friendly for environment.
To conclude, nowadays we have a big choice of means of transport. They make the world smaller than it is. We can go whenever and wherever we want, choosing the most convienient way of travelling. The choice belongs to us.
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