A Nice Summery Surprise
-A Nice Summer Surprise
I remember it as today. It was summer and I was eleven years old.
-I remember it as if it was today.................................
I was boring deadly...
-I was deadly bored.
All my friends went away somewhere: over sea, in mountains or to grandparents,
-................. somewhere: to the seaside, to the mountains.....
but I must stayed at home.
- but I had to stay at home.
On addition, I didn't have sister or brother and both my mother and father were working in spite of holidays.
-In addition,I didn't have a sister or a brother.............
When we had to going to Hungary as turned out that my mum was ill.
-When we were to go to Hungary it turned out ........
She felt bad and queer from several days, but then she felt splendidly.
-.....................for several days but then she got better.
It was strange and we didn't know what happened, so she had to went
-.................. so she had to go
to a doctor - there was no question about it.
When my mother returned I saw a huge smile on her face. Immediately I realized that it couldn't be a bad news. My mum was pregnant.
“You will be have a little brother, soon" - she said.
-"You will have.....
I couldn't believe... “I will be have a brother?" - I repeated with astonishment.
-.......................... I will have a brother.........
Next, I was hugging her firmly.
- Next I hugged her firmly.
I was dreaming about siblings and my dream came true. I was very happy. My mother given birth in December.
-.................gave birth ......
I have obtained brother on Christmas :).
-(obtain - to bardzo formalnie) I have got (albo: I was given) a brother for Christmas
- It was the best present! Today, I'm eighteen years old and I have seven-years (seven-YEAR-old - bez S) old brother. Indescribable(INCREDIBLE - to trochę co innego , ale jakoś bardziej mi pasuje)
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She had to GO.