Endangered species prosze o korekte :P

There are meny endangered species in whole world.
The most of all are Birds and Mammals.
Endangered species features promote like
-High position in feed chain
-Huge body size
-Huge occurrence
-Limited areas of occurrences
-Competing with person about same feed stocks
-Lack of capability of migration
The activity of person effects environment negatively.For example:
-deforestation
-hunting
-destroying of natural environment
-changes of climates
-poluttions
-Introduction of sort of new animal species.
For protection of animals are founded
-national parks
-nature sanctuaries
-zoo's
-parks of nature
International cooperation is important too
So,emerged organisation called union of protection of international nature
also Poles have contributed to which revolt.
This organisation has established the three basic principles
first: Don't exploit animals and plants so intensyvely in order to can not regenerate
second: Don't change the earth in order to basic vital processes have been broken
third: Everything is necessary to make resource maintain animals and plants on earth living.
I hope the people will be employed for it.Then animals on earth living will be safe!

no serio mógłby ktoś tu luknąć :P

pewnie nie wszystko, taki mądry nie jestem tu też moga być błędy ale chciałem pomóc....

po pierwsze: there are many, food chain, in the whole world,
( czemu ptaki i ssaki z dużej litery?)
Limited areas of occurrence,

to zdanie do zmiany (Endangered species features promote like) zaraz może coś wymyślę

Competing for the same food stocks,

The activity of people which has a negative influence on environment,

devastation\destruction of natural environment

climatical changes

spreading the new animal species.

zoos,

nie wiem co z tym zrobić :

International cooperation is important too
So,emerged organisation called union of protection of international
nature

zamiast so dałbym as

also Poles have contributed to this revolt

firstly: Don't exploit animals and plants so intensively because of their ability to regenerate ( zamast first napisz firstly itd secondly)


Don't change the earth in order no to broke the basic vital processes

Everything is necessary( nie lepiej important?) to keep animals and plants on earth alive

And then animal life on earth will be safe!