Witam . Czy mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić błedy w wypracowaniu ?

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Temat wypracowania : Discuss advantages and disadvantages of introducing ( something) into your school.
Mile widziane będzie jak ktoś ma ochotę dodać coś od siebie ;)

Nowadays , many people live in town, where there are factories which are pollute air. Moreover today most of people are useing cars which they are produce too much exhaust.
I suppose the great idea is introduce wildlife garden near the school. There are lots of advantages od introducing this project into our school.
Firstly , in this garden there will be a lot of trees which , will be made an Oxygen for us. It will be great , because people which live in town , need to walk with the child , but they haven't got any gardens for that.
Further more kids could see a wildlife animals. Also students could arrive there , where they have a break in school.
Although , If we want to create this garden , we must destroy a small factory.
I strongly belive that this project would consider by the headmaster.

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