Dear Human Resource Director (lepiej Sir/Madam),
I am pleased to present my resume for a position as a XYZ [for your review].
In review of the attached document You will find that I am highly capable of performing this role and associated functions.
I am [brak przedimka] V [co to ma znaczyc?] year student of economy [zle slowo] at [brak przedimka] University of Economics in Poznan (specialization -Market Analysis) and [brak przedimka]graduate of Study Centre (specialization – German business language). Nowadays [too colloquial; nie passuje] I am in the process of doing my MA thesis entitled “Fundamental and technical analysis on [ja bym tu napisala "of"] the polish [pisze sie z duza litera] capital market in [brak przedimka]years 2010 – 2011”. My current experience (jakie? work? volunteer?] is related to
a finance and sales
branch. As a student, I have put my knowledge
and into practice by
activity [/s actively participating in [brak przedimka]Student’s Business Centre Club Organization (Fundraising department), and being a participant
of a in the “Triumph of entrepreneurship” conference. During [brak przedimka] years 2[tel]I was an active investor on [brak przedimka]Warsaw Stock Exchange and Newconnect. At present, I am a member of
In[chyba "the"] Association of Individual Investors, where I have [been, lepiej "worked as"] an Intern as [brak przedimka] Chief’s editor assistant. For one year, I had an opportunity to develop my sales skills as a telemarketer in [bp...chyba rozumiesz skrot] Call Center, as [bp]Telephone interviewer and Wellness Advisor (I have built a
n sales team of several people). My last? [czy most recent? experience in [bp] Structure Data & Region Support department at Credit Suisse
was related TO
with data processing and PROVIDING customer service in foreign languages (list them) .
I believe my combination of sales and finance experience is an excellent match for the XYZ position [you described...nie potrzebne]. Attached is a copy of my resume [for your perusal (if you want to get "fancy")] with additional information about my skills and qualifications. I look forward to your response.
Sincerely,
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