Speech na angielski o uzależnieniu od Internetu

Mam do was wielką prośbę o sprawdzenie mojej pracy i o ewentualne poprawki, z góry wielkie dzięki za pomoc:
Recently there's been more and more warnings about the net addiction - people forget about sleep, food, friends and spend their life in front of the screen.
In many cases problem isn't as serious as he could be. Young people talk a lot by communicators and it helps them to know new buddies and to communication with theirs friends. Internet is also valuable source of information and entertainment. But it's very important to remember that we should use internet if we really need to.
Despite of all his advantages, Internet can be also very dangerous for us. There is many symptoms of Internet addiction. Mainly it is spending more and more time on the Internet, failure to control behavior, neglecting family and friends and change in your sleep pattern. If you have those symptoms or even one of them, you shouldn't ignore it.
Internet isn't, at face value, as dangerous as drugs, alcohol or cigarretes. But internet addiction is spreading like wildfire and everyone of us should control time spend in front of the computer.

Recently there's been more and more warnings about the 'net addiction' (nie, napisz 'addiction to the internet' albo 'internet addiction') - people forget about sleep, food, friends and spend their life in front of the screen.
In many cases (przedimek) problem isn't as serious as 'he' (gdzie tu jakis 'on'; sie wtraca? po cvo to?) could be. Young people talk a lot by communicators and it helps them to know new buddies and to 'communication' (tutaj ma byc czasownik) with 'theirs' (popraw to slowo) friends. (przedimek ) internet is also (przedimek) valuable source of information and entertainment. But it's very important to remember that we should use internet ONLY if we really need to.
Despite 'of' (niepotr) all 'his' (nie, w jez. ang tego nie ma - dlaczego piszesz tak?) (daj tutaj slowo)advantages, (przedimek) Internet can 'be also' (zla kol slow) very dangerous for us. 'There is' (tutaj masz pomieszane, there' potrzebuje l. mn) many symptoms of Internet addiction.
(przedimek) internet isn't, at face value, as dangerous as drugs, alcohol or cigarretes. But internet addiction is spreading like wildfire and everyone of us should control time 'spend' (zly czas) in front of the computer.

Wielkie dzięki, poprawiłam, czy teraz wszystko jest OK?
Recently there's been more and more warnings about the internet - people forget about sleep, food, friends and spend their life in front of the screen.
In many cases a problem isn't as serious as could be. Young people talk a lot by communicators and it helps them to know new buddies and to communicate with their friends. An internet is also an valuable source of information and entertainment. But it's very important to remember that we should use internet only if we really need to.
Despite all advantages, an Internet can also be very dangerous for us. There are many symptoms of Internet addiction. Mainly it is spending more and more time on the Internet, failure to control behavior, neglecting family and friends and change in your sleep pattern. If you have those symptoms or even one of them, you shouldn't ignore it.
An internet isn't, at face value, as dangerous as drugs, alcohol or cigarretes. But internet addiction is spreading like wildfire and everyone of us should control time spent in front of the computer.

For starters: "Recently there's been more and more warnings ..."
+ Poczytaj cos odnosnie zasady uzywania przedimkow przed slowami np: "internet" i "internet addiction"