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I come from nuclear family. My family consists of four people: mother, father, sister and I. I also have a pet called Czaki. It’s a dog and I like him very much

My mum name is Jola. She's 35 years .My mum works in shool and she`s cleaning lady. My dad name is Wiesław. He has 44 years. Dad works in firm "STAN PLUS". His passion is football. My sister name is Ola . She's 18 years and she is a pupil in the third class of secondary school. Ola`s into in music. Her favourite singers are Whitney Houston and Bryan Adams.

My parents strict. They are terribly worried about my and my sister. They don`t allowed us to stay out all night. We have to back home by a certain time.
My mother`s a house-wife, but father`s a bread-winner.
There`s a big generation gap between me and my parent`s and there`s no contact between us any more. My mother doesn`t understand me and my father always criticises me even i try to be like for him

Oto kilkanaście moich propozycji:

mother, father, sister and I -> my mother, father, sister and me.
It's a dog and I like him very much. -> It's a dog and I like it very much.
-> He's a dog and I like him very much.
My mum name -> My mum's name
35 years. -> thirty-five years old.
-> thirty-five.
My mum works -> She works
in school -> at school
cleaning lady -> a cleaning lady
My dad name -> My dad's name
He has 44 years. -> He is fourty-four years old.
-> He is fourty-four.
Dad works -> He works
in firm "STAN PLUS" -> in a firm called "STAN PLUS"
-> in "STAN PLUS" corporation.
My sister name -> My sister's name
She's 18 years -> She's eighteen years old
in the third class of secondary -> in the third class of the secondary
Ola's into -> Ola is into
My parents strict. -> My parents are strict.
about my -> about me
allowed us -> allow us
back home by -> come back home at
and my parent's -> and my parents
and there's no contact between us any more. -> so there's no good relationship between us anymore.
even i try -> even if i
like for him -> like him
-> nice for him

To tyle.