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mozecie sprawdzic i poprawic błedy!!! plis
I live in *******. My town is small.Ther are two primary school and one high school.We have also a post, a bank a amphitheatre and one cinema.
******** has got picturesque landscape.In vicinity are much lakes and woods. People live inn cottages( a moze ktos wie jak jest w blokach??). Not far away is sandy beach, where can swim and sunbathe.
Ilike this village,because it is paceful and pretty.

prosze zobaczcie na błedy i dopiszcie cos!!!
błagam pomózcie!!!!
z góry dziekuje!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

>Ther are two primary school
There are two primary schools

>We have also a post
We also have a post office

>In vicinity are much lakes
In vicinity are MANY lakes

>People live inn cottages( a moze ktos wie jak jest w
>blokach??)
People live in cottages and blocks of flats

>Not far away is sandy beach, where can swim and sunbathe.
Not far away, there is a sandy beach, where you can swim & sunbathe

To chyba tyle z tych najbardziej rzucających się w oczy błędów (choć i tak wypracowanie jest b. dobre) :)

Pozdrawiam

WIELKIE DZIEKI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!