Sprawdzenie poprawności

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Chodzi mi tylko o ocene pod wzgledem gramatyki, bo tekst przejdzie poważne poprawki, ale to jutro, narazie chce o ew. poprawe aktualnego.
Zresztą to nie koniec, jutro postaram się napisać więcej, i poprawić początek, bo był na siłe trochę ;p


My last holidays was so awesome. I wouldnt expect, I will in Island of God – Capri.
I really wanted to see Rome, so when I came to Italy, first point of my trip was capital of that beautiful country. Weather was good, so I stayed in small village near Adriatic Sea for 2 days.
It''s hard to say but our sea in Poland, isnt beatiful and warm as Adritatic.
Then I went to Rome , and there i met the most beatiful girl, which I've ever seen.
She smiled to me! It was amazing feeling. As soon as possible I went to her, to buy some thing, because she was vendor in some small shop near border with Vatican.
She was very nice, and she talked with me, in english of course.
It was strange, becasue in Italy, few people know how to speak in English.
But nevermind , i've not seen anything , only that black-haired , middle-sized girl.
So i wanted to buy something in her shop. Whatever she'd sell , i'd buy it!
So this is begining of my story „How i lost my money”.
I bought some juice , in Italy called „granita”. But i had to go, so my romance ended before it began...
Then we went to Vatican, and we visited St. Peter's basillic. I have only 1 word to describe that basillic. AWESOME! So many sculputure, and that beatiful images!
I will never forget it.
Then we sailed by ship to Capri. We had beatiful weather, so we didn't have any problems in transport.
When I came to Capri, i was in shock, I've never seen something more beautiful than that island.
Beatiful sea, mountains , beach. I can't describe it, you have to see it.
When i walked in some street, i met polish peoples , and I talked with them.
When we talked, we went to queen's garden, and there was something strange.
There was sculputure of Włodzimierz Lenin.
They didnt want to destroy it, because it's monument.
Anyway, in that garden we can see about 300 kind of rare flowers. I have a lot pictures from that garden, it's so beautiful.
My last holidays 'was' (dlaczegpo dajesz czas. l.poj a masz rzeczownik l. mnogiej?) so awesome. I 'wouldnt' (popraw) (cos brak) 'expect' (popraw) THAT I 'will' (zle slowo) (brak cos) in (cos brak) Island of God – Capri.
I really wanted to see Rome, so when I came to Italy, (cos bnrak) first point of my trip was (cos brak) capital of that beautiful country. (cos brak) weather was good, so I stayed in (cos brak) small village near (cos brak) Adriatic Sea for 2 days.
It's 'hard to say' (zle pojecie) but our sea in Poland (po co tutaj jest przecinek?), 'isnt' (popraw) (cos brakl) 'beatiful' (popraw) and warm as (cos brak) 'Adritatic' (popraw).
Then I went to Rome , and there 'i' (popraw) met the most 'beatiful' (popraw) girl, 'which' THAT I've ever seen.
She smiled 'to' (zle slowo) me! It was (cos brak) amazing feeling. As soon as 'possible' (I was able) I went to her, (po co tu przecinek?) to buy some 'thing' (zle slowo), because she was (cos brak) vendor in some small shop near (cos brak) border with (cos brak) Vatican.
She was very nice, and she talked with me, in English of course.
It was strange, 'becasue' (popraw) in Italy(, - co to jest z tymi przecinkami tutaj - niepotr) few people know how to speak in English.
But nevermind , 'i've' (popraw) not seen anything , only that black-haired , 'middle-sized' (popraw) girl.
So 'i' (popraw) wanted to buy something in her shop. Whatever she'd sell , 'i'd' (popraw) buy it!
So this is (cos brak) 'begining' (popraw) of my story „How 'i' (popraw) lost my money”.
I bought some juice , in Italy called „granita”. But 'i' (popraw) had to go, so my romance ended before it began...
Then we went to (cos brak) Vatican, and we visited 'St. Peter's basillic' (poszukaj jak to sie pisze). I have only '1' (popraw) word to describe that 'basillic' (popraw). AWESOME! So many 'sculputure' (p[opraw i tu l. mnoga), and 'that' (popraw) 'beatiful' (popraw) images!
I will never forget it.
Then we sailed by ship to Capri. We had 'beatiful' (popraw) weather, so we didn't have any problems in transport.
When I came to Capri, 'i' (popraw) was in shock, I've never seen 'something' (slowo tutaj ma byc 'anything') more beautiful than that island.
'Beatiful' (popraw) sea, mountains , beach. I can't describe it, you have to see it.
When 'i' (popraw) walked in 'some' (popraw) street, 'i' (popraw) met Polish 'peoples' (popraw) , and I talked with them.
When we talked, we went to Queen's garden, and there was something strange.
There was (cos brak) sculputure of Włodzimierz Lenin.
They 'didnt' (popraw) want to destroy it, because it's (cos brak) monument.
Anyway, in that garden we can see about 300 'kind' (popraw) of rare flowers. I have a lot (cos brak) pictures from that garden, it's so beautiful.



My last holidays were so great. I wouldn't have expected, I will in Island of God - -Capri.
I really wanted to see Rome, so when I came to Italy, first point of my trip was the capital of that beautiful country. The weather was good, so I stayed in small village near Adriatic Sea for 2 days.
It''s hard to say but our sea in Poland, isn't as beautiful and warm as The Adritatic.
Then I went to Rome , and there I met the most beautiful girl, who I've ever seen.
She smiled at me! It was amazing feeling. As soon as possible I went to her, to buy something, because she was a shop assistance in some small shop near the border with Vatican. Whatever she'd sell , I'd buy it! So this is beginning of my story „How i lost my money”.
She was very nice, and she talked to me, in English of course.
It was strange, because in Italy, few people know how to speak in English.
But never mind , I didn't see anything , except that black-haired , middle-sized girl.
I bought some juice ,which in Italy is called „granita”. But I had to go, so my romance had ended before it began...It's so sad, but everything what is good must come to an end.
Then we went to Vatican, and we visited St. Peter's Basillic. I have only 1 word to describe that basillic. AWESOME! So many sculputures, and these beautiful images!
I will never forget them.
Then we sailed by ship to Capri. We had a beautiful weather, so we didn't have any problems with transport.
When I came to Capri, I was in shock, I've never seen anything more beautiful than that island.
Beautiful sea, mountains , beach. I can't describe it, you have to see it.
When I was walking along street, I met Polish peoples , and I talked with them.
When we talked, we went to queen's garden, and there was something strange.
There was a sculputure of Włodzimierz Lenin.
They didn't want to destroy it, because it's monument.
Anyway, in that garden we can see about 300 kinds of rare flowers. I have a lot pictures from that garden, which was so beautiful.
I ate in some restaurants famous Italian pizza, but i can say it's one thing, which in Poland is better than in Italy. We have better pizza! I don't know, maybe I ate in a bad pizzeria, but I don't think so, because that restaurant seemed very good.
Unfortunately, as I said earlier, everything what is good must come to an end So when my holiday is over, I have a lot of beautiful photos which remind me of Capri and the image, but not on paper, just in my mind – the face of the beautiful girl from Rome.


I jak teraz po przeglądzie, i poprawie?;)
Cytat:
I ate in some restaurants famous Italian pizza, but i can say it's one thing, which in Poland is better than in Italy.
Sprobuj poprawic.
I wouldn't have expected, I will in Island of God - -Capri.
Popraw mi to zdanie wg wwskazowek ktore dalam wczesniej, ty je zignorowales.....nie rob tego...because that makes me angry, and you wouldn't want to see me when I get angry ;-)
I shall in the island of god?
Jak źle, możesz napisac poprawnie, bo na jutro potrzebowałbym , a pomysłu nie mam ;p
jak Ci zalezy, zajrzyj do ksiazki
po will/shall musi byc czasownik
Faktycznie, dzięki, użyję ze spend time in capri, lub something like this. :)
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