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konrad18m
01 paź 2012
Mam prośbe, czy moglby ktos sprawdzi poprawnosc tego tekstu i ewentualnie poprawić pewne błędy? Z gory dziekuje za pomoc.

Hi. I’m on the fifth grade of (?:) ) Clinical Psychology (can’t wait to finish this bloody studies) In the back of my mind I see myself sitting in the sircle and introducing myself. Since I remember I hated that part. Not only because it was particularly stressful but also I never knew what to say but this time I do my best. I’m a 23 self-thaught front-end web designer. My first site was designer really long time ago . It was a fanpage (I won’t betray about who because it is way too embarrassing). If you ask me why I started doing it I wouldn’t know. There was no reason It just happened. But all I know is I enjoy every minute of it and want to learn more and more. I think it is desirable as well as important to do in life what you are passionated about and I’m so lucky to have it. I offer: //

To make my projects perfect I use programmes such as: //
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konrad18m
01 paź 2012
sprawdzić - rzecz jasna. Literówka ;)
grudziu
01 paź 2012
Cytat: konrad18m
Mam prośbe, czy moglby ktos sprawdzi poprawnosc tego tekstu i ewentualnie poprawić pewne błędy? Z gory dziekuje za pomoc.

Hi. I’m on the fifth grade of IN THE FIFTH YEAR OF (?:) ) Clinical Psychology (I can’t wait to finish this bloody studies) In the back of my mind I see myself sitting in the sircle and introducing myself. Since I remember I'VE ALWAYS hated that part (OF WHAT?). Not only because it was inwersja jak zaczynasz od 'not' particularly stressful but also I never knew BY/THROUGH NOT KNOWING what to say, but this time I'II do my best. Ogolnie nie wiem o co chodzi:). I’m a 23 year-old front-end web designer, WHICH I AM RUNNING ON MY OWN (=self-taught). My first site was designer really (brak czegos) long time ago . It was a fanpage (I won’t betray about whoM because it is way too embarrassing). If you askED me why I started doing it I wouldn’t know REPLY. There was no reason FOR DOING THAT. It just happened. But all I know is THAT I enjoy every minute of it and want to learn more and more. I think it is desirable as well as important to do in life what you are passionated about KEEN ON/INTERESTED IN, and I’m so lucky to have it. I offer: //

To make my projects perfect I use programmes such as: //
eva74
01 paź 2012
not only because it was jest dobrze

in a circle nie in the circle

tam więcej problemów jest, ale na razie niech poprawi to co grudziu podał, potem można będzie dalej poprawiać
mg
01 paź 2012
way too embarrassing jest ok
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konrad18m
01 paź 2012
Hi. I’m in the fifth year of Clinical Psychology (I can’t wait to finish this bloody studies) In the back of my mind I see myself sitting in a circle and introducing myself. Since I remember I've always hated that part of class. Not only because it was particularly stressful but also by not knowing what to say, but this time I'll do my best. (chodzi o to, ze ogolnie nigdy nie wiem co o sobie powiedziec ale teraz i'll do my best ;) ). I’m a 23 year-old front-end web designer, which I'm running on my own . My first site was designer really (?) long time ago . It was a fanpage (I won’t betray about whom because it is way too embarrassing). If you asked me why I started doing it I wouldn’t know reply. There was no reason for doing that. It just happened. But all I know is that I enjoy every minute of it and want to learn more and more. I think it is desirable as well as important to do in life what you are keen on, and I’m so lucky to have it. I offer: //


poprawilem, dzięki. licze na dalsze wskazowki...
konrad18m
01 paź 2012
My first site was designed really (?) long time ago
grudziu
01 paź 2012
Cytat: mg
way too embarrassing jest ok

Wiem. Podkreslilem to, gdyz mozna to napisac jeszcze prosciej.
grudziu
01 paź 2012
mg@
Z racji, ze dluzej 'siedzisz' w ang, pytanie do Ciebie. Jezeli zaczynamy zdanie od 'not only' to nie powinno tam byc inwersji? pozdrawiam
grudziu
01 paź 2012
przyklad z ksiazki dla konstrukcji 'not only' ...but also', uzywanej z inwersja.
"Not only has McDonalds, which employs over 1
million people worldwide, played a huge role in pioneering low standards now equated with the word "McJobs", but it has also decided to restrict our ability to have a public discussion about the impact of the McJobs phenomenon", Naomi Klein, "No Logo: Taking Aim at Brand Bullies" (Toronto: Vintage Canada, 2000)

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argazedon
01 paź 2012
W/g mnie "Not only" nie wymaga tutaj inwersji bo mamy "Not only because... but also because..." . Błąd polega na braku powtórzenia "because" bez którego ta struktura porównawcza traci sens.

mg
01 paź 2012
inwersja nie jest potrzebna
argazedon to wyjasnil
grudziu
01 paź 2012
tara-a-bit.
grudziu
01 paź 2012
'If you asked me why I started doing it I wouldn’t know reply.' Popraw i to. Nie podkreslilem 'know', co moglo Cie zmyslic. Sorry.
mg
01 paź 2012
Cytat: grudziu
Cytat: mg
way too embarrassing jest ok

Wiem. Podkreslilem to, gdyz mozna to napisac jeszcze prosciej.

czyli jak?
grudziu
01 paź 2012
Zamienmy konstrukcje way + too+ adjective (slangowy amerykanizm) na podmiot+ too/much+ adj. it's too/much embarrassing . Po prostu.

mg
01 paź 2012
Nie. Usunąłeś słowo, które coś znaczyło.
tak jakbyś usunął very.
konrad18m
01 paź 2012
Hi. I’m in the fifth year of Clinical Psychology (I can’t wait to finish this bloody studies) In the back of my mind I see myself sitting in a circle and introducing myself. Since I remember I've always hated that part of class. Not only because it was particularly stressful but also because by not knowing what to say, but this time I'll do my best. (chodzi o to, ze ogolnie nigdy nie wiem co o sobie powiedziec ale teraz i'll do my best ;) ). I’m a 23 year-old front-end web designer, which I'm running on my own . My first site was designer really (?) long time ago . It was a fanpage (I won’t betray about whom because it's too embarrassing). If you asked me why I started doing it I wouldn’t have known reply (czy tak?). There was no reason for doing that. It just happened. But all I know is that I enjoy every minute of it and want to learn more and more. I think it is desirable as well as important to do in life what you are keen on, and I’m so lucky to have it. I offer: //


Czy już jest dobrze?
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konrad18m
01 paź 2012
prosilbym jednak o przeczytanie tego ponizej ;)


Hi. I’m in the fifth year of Clinical Psychology (I can’t wait to finish this bloody studies) In the back of my mind I see myself sitting in a circle and introducing myself. Since I remember I've always hated that part of class. Not only because it was particularly stressful but also because by not knowing what to say, but this time I'll do my best. I’m a 23 year-old front-end web designer, which I'm running on my own . My first site was designed really long time ago . It was a fanpage (I won’t betray about whom because it's too embarrassing). If you asked me why I started doing it I wouldn’t have known the reply (czy tak?). There was no reason for doing that. It just happened. But all I know is that I enjoy every minute of it and want to learn more and more. I think it is desirable as well as important to do in life what you are keen on, and I’m so lucky to have it. I offer: //

mg
01 paź 2012
these studies
because of not knowing, because I never know
projektantem, który prowadzę samodzielnie
a really long
nie podoba się 'way'? dlaczego?
nastepne zdanie w II conditional, a na koncu ...what to say
fui_eu
01 paź 2012
betray? moze DISCLOSE lub REVEAL /przykladowo/
mg
01 paź 2012
ok
konrad18m
01 paź 2012
- mg, ja obstawałem przy self-thaught, zostać przy tym?

- If you asked me why I started doing it I wouldn’t know what to say, tak?

-ok, zatem reveal :)

- mg bo ktos tu napisał, ze jest to amerykański angielski, a moim celem jest uk :)


Bardzo dziękuje za wszelką pomoc. Moje ostatnie pytanie: Czy ten tekst po wszystkich Waszych poprawkach bedzie czytelny i zrozumialy dla obcokrajowca? ;)
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mg
01 paź 2012
self-taught jest ok
ok
'in the back ' też jest amerykanskie
jak Ci zalezy na brytyjskim, napisz 'much too embarrassing'
mg
01 paź 2012
Już widzę, kto dopisal 'which I am running on my own"
znowu go przerosło.
terri
02 paź 2012
I’m in the 'fifth' (5th) year of Clinical Psychology (ale czego? czytania, robienia, tutaj brakuje slowo STUDIES) (I can’t wait to finish 'this' (tutaj jest potrzebny odpowiednik l. mn) 'bloody' (to jest przeklenstwo i niema zadnego miejsca w listach, opowiadaniach) studies).
In the back of my mind I see myself sitting in a circle (ale czego? tutaj cos brakuje) and introducing myself. (tu cos brakuje) since I remember I've always hated that part of class. Not only because it was particularly stressful (przecinek przed 'but') but also because 'by' (to jest zle slowo) not knowing what to say, but this time I'll do my best.
I’m a 23 year-old front-end web designer, which 'I'm running on my own' (tego nie rozumiem) . My first site was designed really long time ago (np 10, 20, 30 late temu - tutaj trzeba napisac dokladniej) .
If you asked me why I started doing it I wouldn’t have known (tu cos brakuje) 'the' (zle slowo) reply.
I think it is desirable as well as important to do in life what you are keen on, and I’m so lucky to have 'it.' (nie rozumeim do czego to 'it' sie odnosi - nie jest jasno)
grudziu
02 paź 2012
Cytat: mg
Już widzę, kto dopisal 'which I am running on my own"
znowu go przerosło.

I'II rephrase the sentence one more time so that I don't hear you mutter sth under your breath.

I’m a 23 year-old front-end web designer, what is more, I am managing a website by myself.
mg
02 paź 2012
autor napisal 'self-taught', czyli sam sie uczyl projektowania stron. Nie pisal, ze zarzadza jaka witryna.
Dlaczego nie czytasz tak, zeby zrozumiec?
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grudziu
02 paź 2012
Czytam pobieznie, z powodu braku czasu. Kilka czynnosci naraz na komputerze. Zmylilo mnie 'my first site'. Sorry. Ale jest reszta, ktora 'czuwa' i poprawi.
mg
02 paź 2012
Nie mozesz robic tylu bledow, jezeli poprawiasz - i potem mowic, ze jestem do Ciebie zle nastawiony.
Pisz rzadzej, ale dokladniej.
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