My bedroom
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>I don't share my bedroom. It's a long and narrow room with a big
>window and dark pink curtains.Next the window I have my bog bed where I sleep and spend a lot of time. Near the bed there is a chair for my books. There
>are two carpets on the floor,which one of them is a beige colour. One is in the middle of the room and the second one
>is in front of a door. My wardrobe is in the corner.I have also a cage for my hamster in front of a wardrobe. There's a segment beside the
>desk .On the desk there are boxes for my crayons and pens; a radio , a
>lamp and a computer. There is a chair next to the desk . On the
>window-sill there are flowers , a basket and a box for my CDs. Under
>the window-sill there is a waste-paper-basket and a box for my
>telescope. There are my diplomas above the bed . The walls are blue where many posters hang.
poprawilam troche zmienilam, nie mozesz nampoczatku pisac o dywanach a potem na samym koncu podawac ze jest koloru bezowego...
Poza tym za duzo tego tehre is/are,w eic pozmienialam troszke poiwnno byc dobrze no i rada na przyszlosc, staraj sie "bardziej" rozbudowywac swoje zdanka,pa;)