Sorry[jest okay, nic w tym zlego] I haven’t written for so long. Thank you for your last letter. I am very happy that you have already passed your driving licence.
Guess what?<:> I have just <got to know> [zle, lepiej "learned" albo "found out"} that my older sister is pregnant. She has been married for 5 years. Everyone in the family is very happy because we have been waiting for this event for <the...zle> long time. [cos tu brakuje] Doctor says it will be a girl, so she’ll be my first niece. It is probably* that my sister chooses [ zly czas] me for a godmother, what [zle slowo] is A real privilege for me.
I have also more exciting news for you. Do you remember Ania – my flatmate?
She has recently got to know a very handsome man. After some time, he turned out [brakuje to czasownik] a famous rock star! He <comes to> [wymysl inne slowo...spotyka sie?] Ania every day and tell [l.poj.] us incredible stories. You have to <come to> [wymysl inne slowo] us and get to know him. What about <coming to> [chyba wiesz co tu napisze] me during this [jaki?] holiday? Have you got any other plans? We could do some interesing things. You wouldn’t be bored here. What do you think about this idea? Let me know <if you are decided>. [inna forma by brzmiala lepiej..."once you have decided"]
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it is
probably that my sister ....
Lepiej:
It is likely that my sister will... to be <a> [zle] godmother
albo
My sister will probably choose me...