1.I haven't time.
I don't have time/ I didn't have time/ I haven't had time recently/ I haven't got time- if u own time;)
2.I would tell you about it- what "it" exactly do u have in ur mind? That u don't have time or maybe about Mark's girlfriend?
I would like to tell you something.../ I would like to tell you, that...
3.Mark have- it doesn't even take time to understand: she has, he has, it has. ALWAYS, gee!
Mark has had/ Mark has
4.He met her in a birthday party of Liz- and how did he do that? To be in a bottle, fair enough, but in the party, PURE MAGIC!
He met her at Liz's birthday party
5.She's name is Sophie- do u say: I am name is Whateveryournameis? Or do you say: my name is, so it is not that difficult to get it dear, THINK ( for once)!
She is Sophie/ Her name is Sophie
6.She seems me very lively and friendly- Michael Jackson returned?;)
She seems very lively and friendly to me
7.I liked her already at the beggining. - easy to please, ha?;)
I liked her from the very beginning.
8.She very likes animal.- First grade won't make that mistake
She likes animals very much.
9.She have-REALLY?
She has
10. I think that she's ideal girlfriend for Mark.- Ups! If u think a noun, u think A/AN ( an egg. an umbrella, a table, a pen)
I think she is an ideal girlfriend to/for Mark/ I think she is a perfect girlfriend to/for Mark
The Advert sucks as well, but here u go:
1.I've lost black, large
backpack of nike
I've lost a large, black nike bag-WHY? THINK! ( doesn't happen often, ha?;)Anyways:
opinion - size - age - style - colour - origin - material - purpose / noun please?!
2.Inside was- ever heard of: there is/ there are? RESPECT!
There was a red.....inside.
3.in a math class.- WTF?
at
4.please call to 123456789- that was the only smart thing in here, the numbers;)
please call sounds much better;)
Try and this time:LEARN!
Enjoy ur day:)