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Once upon a time, in a land far for away lived a small mouse which wanted to fly. One day she left her house and she saw a beatiful bird.
Mouse asked him :
What can I do to get the wings like yours ?
Bird told her :
If you want to get wings, You must go to cave, and You must find the special ruby.
If you find ruby you must carry it to "mysterious hill", and put on grass.
Thank you said mouse.
After the conversation mouse went to the cave and she found ruby. She brought ruby on the "mysterious hill". When she put ruby on the grass, mysterious voice told :
Now you will be similar to birds. They will be calling you bat.
a gdzie przedimki? tez fruwaja.......
Nie wiesz czy mouse i bird jest on czy ona. Sprobuj zmienic zeby brzmialo lepiej.
dziękuję :D