Poprawiłem. Skorzystałem z twoich rad Terri oraz dodałem trochę od siebie, to co było źle. Czy teraz jest już w miarę w porządku?
Despite my young age, I have experience in caring for children.
I have a lot of siblings, including a younger sister. I always took care of her.
We have a very good relationship. My mother taught me how to deal with children.
Thanks to her I liked it. I started to take care of the children four years ago.
First I cared for my two-year-old niece. I went for walks with her, I was playing with her and I fed her.
That continued for one year. Then I cared for Fabian. He was three years old. He was really a great boy!
We were getting along, excellently. I took care of him for two years. Now I take care of two children.
These are brothers - Alex and Dominic. Alex is two years old, and Dominic is four years old.
I will take care of them up to April 2014. Throughout these four years I was also responsible for older children.
I took care of a 7-year-old Aurelia and 9-year-old Olivia. I helped them with homework,
I prepared them meals, and I played with them, for example, drawing and painting.
We went for walks, and we baked cakes.
Of course, it's all I did and I'm doing in the afternoon because I still go to school. (Oczywiście to wszystko robiłem i robię w godzinach popołudniowych, ponieważ wciąż chodzę do szkoły.)
I want to be an Au pair because I really like kids. I like to play with them, to invent an interesting game for them.
For sure I will teach them creativity. It is my goal. It's very useful in everyday life.
I'll play cards with them, we will model figurines with salt dough, we'll paint and draw.
I can teach them to play on the piano. With me they definitely will not be bored.
In the future I want to be a teacher, so I can help them with their homework.
I can explain many things to them. I will be for them like an older brother.
We'll fool around and laugh together. Another reason why I want to be an Au pair is, of course, to learn English.
I love this language and I want it grind (szlifować)/ I want expand my horizons (może tak będzie lepiej?).
I can cook because it's my passion.
For over a year I worked as a confectioner. I can prepare delicious breakfasts, lunch, dinners and bake cakes.
Of course I will cook with the kids! If you have a dog that's great! I myself have a dog and I love it very much.
I will go for a walk with your children and your dog. We'll be a great play together! (Będziemy się razem świetnie bawili!)
Housework isn't a problem for me. I can clean up (for example, hoovering, dusting, washing dishes and floors).
What more can I write... I will simply treat your children like my younger siblings.
Feel free to contact me. I would be happy to answer your questions.
PS Of course, I don't tolerate any stimulants. I don't smoke, don't drink alcohol and don't take drugs.
Neither do you, I hope.
I serdecznie przepraszam za tyle błędów. Uczę się angielskiego od 1,5 roku, a gramatykę ciężko jest mi pojąć. Na szczęście dzięki Tobie trochę więcej pojąłem (np. z tymi przedimkami przed l. mn.).
PS Co to znaczy "etc."? Zawsze mnie to ciekawiło, a każdy inaczej to tłumaczy.