I am
writting (ort)
to you (niepotrzebne) about (przedimek) conference that
was (zle slowo. MIALA MIEJSCE?) last week
I have a lot of
disclaimers (??? zle slowo). A LOT OF - nieformalne.
First of all (przecinek)
I want to write something about (przemysl to. CHCIALBYM WSPONIEC O) my
accomodation (ort).
When I decided to participate (przecinek) I was hoping that (przedimek) organizers
will (gramatyka!!) reserve hotel rooms in
bulding where was conference (sprobuj: Przedimek+ KONFERENCYJNY BUDYNEK)
i
had not hot water all day and I
had not T V - jak bedzie "nie mialem"??
(przedimek) Food was very expensive and
is (BYLO PODAWANE W) small quantities.
Happily (zle slowo) I got
with me my own food (zmen szyk). If you invite someone then (MOIM ZDANIEM??) you should provide free meals.
Take this into consideration (to malo uprzejme. Sprobuj: "bylbym wdzieczny, gdybyscie nastepnym razem wzieli to pod uwage".)
I (ALSO) want to express my strong dissatisfaction with (przedimek) quality of (przedimek)presentation. (przedimek) Lecturer
for quickly switch (przemysl to) between slides so it was hard to focus. The next time
when he will be (gramatyka!) lecturer he needs to ask whether (WHO??) can continue. (Przedimek) Single session took to long. I regret that
was not (ZE NIE MIELISMY?) short breaks in which people could relax and take fresh air.
All rooms were
to samll (ort) so
was (WHAT WAS?) very stuffy.
I wanted to (czasownik??) out of the conference as soon as possible.
(przedimek) Organizers did not open the window.
I thought that after the theoretical part will be presented to us in the form od practise. Przemysl to zdanie.
Na koncu przydaloby sie jakies podsumowanie - streszczenie twoich oczekiwan, o ktorych piszesz wyzej - co maja zmienic na nastepnej konferencji?