Sprawdzenie zadania :)

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Witam, proszę o sprawdzenie wypowiedzi pisemnej. Miała ona dotyczyć przeciętnego polaka, uprzejmie proszę o zwrócenie największej uwagi na gramatykę, szczególnie "articles". Pozdrawiam i z góry dziękuję. Oto treść.

Poland contains above 38 5[tel]people. 88% work for a living. The average Pole has only two weeks free time as an annual events in the year.

They are owner of a flat, drive a gas powered car and spend holidays in Egypt. He is 40 years old, is 1.78 m tall and weighs 76 kg. She is 1.68 m tall and weighs 66 kg.

During his life he will spend approximate 19 years working. He make more money than his wife, if he gets salary rise, he would probably buys a car. She work as well, but also does the housework. Our averages have a one child and live in a small town. Usual they live in a foreign country.

Average Pole would call themselves as religious however in fact he or she doesn’t go to church. Only half of Poles go vote because of their criticism for politicians. The typical people who lives in Poland dislike German and Russia. They mostly dream about liveing in the USA.

In their life they will read a lot of newspapers, on the other hand they will read only few books. Average Polish citizen goes to theater once in a 20-year time. After work they eat a dinner and watch a television. Recently the most popular programs are serials. It is really hard to meet somebody who don’t have a cell phone, or a computer.

Mr. average will die at 75, Mrs. five years after him.
edytowany przez mojsiek1234: 20 lis 2013
Robisz to slowo w slowo z polskiego, nie wychodzi najlepiej.

Poland 'contains' (to jest nie za bardzo trafne slowo, trzeba cos innego) above 38,500,000 people. '88% work for a living' (generalnie nie zaczynamy zdania tak. Mozesz..Of these). The average Pole has only two weeks free time as an annual 'events' (to jest calkowicie zle slowo) in the year.

(tutaj musisz napisac, ze chodzi ci o przecietnego...)They are owner of a flat, drive a gas-powered car and spend holidays in Egypt.

During his life he will spend 'approximate' (zla czesc mowy) 19 years working. He 'make' (ale przeciez 'he' to 3os.l.poj) more money than his wife, if he gets (brak przedimka) salary rise, he would probably 'buys' (zle slowo) a car. She 'work' ('she' to 3os.l.poj) as well, but also does the housework. Our averages have 'a' (niepotr) one child and live in a small town. 'Usual' (zla czesc mowy) they live in a foreign country.

(brak przedimka) average Pole would call themselves 'as' (niepotr) religious, (przecinek przed however, however in fact he or she 'doesn’t' (zle slowo) go to church. Only half of Poles go (tu cos brak) vote because of their criticism for politicians. The typical people who lives in Poland 'dislike' (tutaj 3os.l.poj) 'German' (Gerrman co? musisz napisac) and 'Russia' (czy tu chodzi o kraj, bo wtedy musisz zmienic koncowke w German). They mostly dream about 'liveing' (blad ortog) in the USA.

(brak przedimka) average Polish citizen goes to (brak przedimka) theater once in 'a' (niepotr) 20-yearS. 'time' (niepotr o calkowicie niepasuje). After work they eat 'a' (niepotr) dinner and watch 'a' (niepotr) television. Recently the most popular 'programs' (prograMMES) are serials. It is really hard to meet somebody who 'don’t' (od kiedy taki slangh uzywasz? tutaj DOES NOT) have a cell phone, or a computer.

Dziękuję!

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