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...So if you like horse and something with adrenaline you must to pick out horse jumping.I've always wanted to try this,because i think it is fantastic sport.There are practical reasons to do this.For example horse-jumping keeps you fit,and you are near the animals-nautre-.This sport connect two things jumping and very hard dressing.Many people think that dressing is very easy discipline and training it people are scery of jumping.But in my opinion it is wonderfull sport.This discipline is for people who like animals and adrenaline.So you must try this!

>...So if you like horses and something with adrenaline you must pick
>out horse jumping.I've always wanted to try this,because I think it is a
>fantastic sport.There are practical reasons to do this.For example,
>horse-jumping keeps you fit,and you are near the animals-nature-.This
>sport connects two things: jumping and very difficult dressage.Many people
>think that dressage is very easy discipline and people who practice it are
>scared of jumping.But in my opinion it is a wonderful sport.This
>discipline is for people who like animals and adrenaline.So you must
>try this!

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