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Nowadays computers and internet are very populars. They are used by everybody in school,job and house.It has adventages and disadventages.

Firstly of all, internet has a lot of informations from different fields. Using computers allows young people develop their interest and hobby in house. Furthermore, internet facilitates us everyday. We can look for informations about current events and get payments in one moments. More over communication is easier because we can talk to someone who is far away.

Regardless of adventages this topic has a negative aspects. People more and more time spend with their computers and this is bad for theri health.Lack of active leads to obesity in younger and younger people. Lots of us have a problems with spine and eyes.
Due to new forms of communication, our life becames faster.Resign the traditional letters and use e-mail, pay by internet and read books on the web.

To sum up using computers has good and bad aspects. Hovevery,gives us a lot of new possibility and make easier daily.
Nowadays computers and internet are very 'populars' (co o za slowo? gdzie jego znalazles?). They are used by everybody in school,job and house. 'It' (nie rozumiem o czego to 'it sie odnosi) has 'adventages' (blad ortog) and 'disadventages' (blad ortog).

Firstly 'of all' (nie, albo 'Firstly', albo 'First of all' - nie mieszaj jak nie wiesz), internet has a lot of 'informations' (co to za slowo? Napisz zrodlo tego slowa) from different fields. Using computers allows young people (brak slowa) develop their interest and hobby in (brak slowa) house. Furthermore, internet 'facilitates us' (ciekawa jestem w jaki sposob? co to ma znaczyc?) everyday. We can look for 'informations' (poszukaj jak to slowo sie pisze) about current events and get 'payments' (nie rozumiem co to slowo tutaj robi) in 'one moments' ('one', to dla mnie znaczy 'jeden' i musi byc rzecz. l. poj obok niego).

Regardless of adventages 'this topic' (to dokladnie znaczy- jaki topic?) has 'a' (niepotr) negative aspects. People (daj tutaj czasownik) more and more time 'spend' (w zlym miejscu) with their computers and this is bad for 'theri' (ortog) health. Lack of 'active' (zle slowo) leads to obesity in younger and younger people. Lots of us have 'a' (dlaczego dajesz 'a' prxzed l. mnoga?) problems with spine and eyes.
Due to new forms of communication, our life 'becames' (ortog) faster. 'Resign' (zle slowo, ale tu trzeba wiecej slow) the traditional letters and use e-mail, pay by internet and read books on the web.

'Hovevery' (ortog) , (brak slowa) gives us a lot of new 'possibility' (tutaj l. mnoga) and 'make easier daily' (tego nie rozumiem).

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