Bardzo prosiłbym o ewentualne skorygowanie mojego krótkiego wypracowania.
Dear Jon,
I am very happy you are coming to Poland. I am going to pick you up from the airport. Then we are going to the cinema with Polly. It is her birthday.
Buy her earrings. She loves jewellery. By the way, I am going to go to a concert on Saturday. I am so excited! This weekend is going to be awesome.
I would like you to invite you to my birthday party which start at 6pm, December 18th. The party is going to be in my house. Please let me know if you can be there.
love, Emily