Winter Olympics in Poland

Witam. Prosiłbym o sprawdzenie czy w poniższym wypracowaniu nie ma żadnych błędów. Nie zaszkodzi też jak ktoś by dorzucił jakieś mądre zdanie do tego :)

Z góry dzięki za pomoc. (2 liceum)

Czy w Polsce mogłyby się odbyć zimowe igrzyska olimpijskie?

Nowadays a lot of people talk about organization of Winter Olympics in Poland in 2022.
In my opinion in Poland are conditions to organize Winter Olypmics. In the last years in Poland were organized football and volleybal european championships. These were succesfully events (only if comes about organization). There will be also organized handball world championships I think it means that Poland is ready to organize Winter Olympics. In south Poland is a lot of place for build new sport facilities. Furthermore, mostly of polish people are very interested of all sport events. I guess that Winter Olympics organized in Poland would be unusual event.

about organizing the Winter
drugie zdanie ma polski szyk wyrazow, trzecie tez
succesfully = udanie
zdanie z comes jest niegramatyczne
zdanie z there will jest niegramatyczne. Podmiotem maja byc mistrzostwa
w zdaniu z south brakuje podmiotu there
place = miejsce czy miejsca?
for build = do budować
sports facilities
mostly of - niegramatyczne
interested nie laczy sie z of
event jest policzalne

In the last years... Ja bym dał inne słowo /rymuje sie z last;)/

Nowadays a lot of people talk about organizing of Winter Olympics in Poland in 2022.
In my opinion in Poland are conditions to organize Winter Olypmics. Lately in Poland were organized football and volleybal european championships. These were succesfully events. Handball world championships will be also organized in Poland. I think it means that Poland is ready to organize Winter Olympics. In south Poland is a lot of places for build new sports facilities. Furthermore, mostly polish people interest all sport events. I guess that Winter Olympics organized in Poland would be an unusual event.

Co jeszcze do poprawy ?

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Źle poprawies mostly of. Mnie się wydaje że chodzi ci o większość polish people, wyszło na w większości/przewaznie. Sprobuj poprawić to i polish;)
In south Poland is a lot of places for build new sports facilities. To jest po polsku ang słowami. Zmień IS bo masz l.mn i dodaj THERE.
Wciąż są inne błędy;)

gdzie są jeszcze jakieś błędy ? dzięki

Nowadays a lot of people talk about organizing of Winter Olympics in Poland in 2022.
In my opinion in Poland are conditions to organize Winter Olypmics. Lately in Poland were organized football and volleybal european championships. These were succesfully events. Handball world championships will be also organized in Poland. I think it means that Poland is ready to organize Winter Olympics. In south Poland there are a lot of places for build new sports facilities. Furthermore, very much polish people interest all sport events. I guess that Winter Olympics organized in Poland would be an unusual event.

są prawie wszystkie te same, które były od początku.