Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów

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Proszę o sprawdzenie tej krótkiej formy wypowiedzi ;) Hi Ann This afternoon I am going to the cinema. Would you like to join me. It is a comedy which talk about two crazy sisters. Durind watching this film we surely will have a good fun. I have already bought two tickets. It will be fantastic if you agree to accompany me.
Chyba dobrze durind-during
Hi Ann. I'm going to to the cinema this afternoon and I was wondering if you would like to join me. The film is a comedy about two creazy sisters. We would surely have so much fun watching it. I have already bought two tickets. It would be fantastic if you agreed to accompany me. Make up your mind and let me know asap.

Cheers.

Tak chyab jest troche lepiej pzdro.
It is a
>comedy which talk about two crazy sisters. Lepiej: It's a
>comedy about two crazy sisters.
I postaraj się używać więcej skrótów. Będzie brzmieć bardziej naturalnie ( w końcu to wypowiedź nieformalna) I'm going... I've already ....

Niektóre zwroty zbyt formalne np. accompany, would you like to join me, ale nie jest to wielki błąd a i może anglsitka sie nie przyczepi ;p