Czy dobrze napisałem CV? Proszę o ocenę

Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
Witam serdecznie, proszę o sprawdzenie czy CV jest poprawnie napisane ;)

Z góry bardzo dziękuję.

CURRICULUM VITAE
Personal data:
Name: XXX XXX
Date of birth: XXX
Marital status: single
Home address:
Street: XXX
City: XXX
Postal code: XXX
Phone number: XXX
Email address:
Education and qualifications:
2[tel]High School Katolickie Stowarzyszenie Wychowawców
2[tel]Cosmetic Post-High School (finished with the title: make-up artist)
Work experience:
- Sales Specialist - year internship in clothing store –
- Sales Specialist – lingerie shop
- Production worker
- Packer
- Cleaner
Qualifications and Additional Skills:
Foreign languages:
English – communicative
Other:
Computer skills
Cash register skills
Diligence, honesty, reliability and responsibility, flexible, communication skills