Sprawdzenie opowiadania

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Hej, miałem za zadanie napisać opowiadanie na 200 słów. I chciałbym abyście pomogli mi i sprawdzili czy są tutaj jakieś błędy gdyż ocena z tego jest dla mnie bardzo ważna. Jestem na poziomie B2.

Cytat:
Last summer in little village in south Poland called Koziegłówki small group of friends discovered something very strange in local forest. The legend about what happened in the old tall trees was on mouth of every person in voivodeship, even country. The local community was horrified by big whole which leads to hell…

The story begins in very hot day in June when local crew of boys which included five guys in age from 15 to 19 decided to play hide and seek in forest short way off his houses. This place was not very popular among villagers because at times of Second World War Nazis had been killing Jews between the trees. The boys began to play. At the beginning of the game, everything was fine however all came to an end. When they arrived place when they started every round, they suddenly realized that they had lost one of them. They had been searching for missing person for about three hours when one of them heard a scream from the bottom of the earth. Group was stood in front of huge rock hole without end. They were looking into it for a while when they heard a loud laugh from the stones. After that evil force pulled them into heart of planet.

That case was being investigated but the truth is known only by the trees…

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