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Let's imagine an ordinary high school and students. These people are often ambitious, they want to learn. There is no other way if they want to get a job. They have to go study after high school.
If we ask some students, we will hear they don't know who are they want to be, what they want to do in the future.
Today there is so many ways and options. There is a lot of new specializations of studies. But that makes, that lot of young people, have problems with makeing decisions, they are insecure and they fear adulthood. In the second hand they except they will find a dream job after studies.
Today there is a big unemployment. There is a lot of problems with finding a job. That situation makes people going abroad and there to find a job.
Although students study a lot, but they don't believe in themselves. Makeing decisions about future is very hard. Young people make mistakes and hardly have a protection in family.
Some of them choose a soft option - they stop learning. They think they will be nobody in the future. They dont believe in themselves.
Jakbys się nie wydawało (nie wiem jak to napisac) young people think about their future, and these thoughts make them frighten.
Fala pesymizmu zalewa szkoły! (tego też nie wiem) fala.. pesimissm ... zalwea ...schools!
- ... they don't know who (bez "are") they want to be...
- Today there are so many ways and options.
- But that makes that lot of young people have problems with making decisions...
- ... That situation makes people going abroad and to find a job there.
- Although students study a lot, they don't believe in themselves. Making decisions about future is very hard...
... They don't believe in themselves.
there are a lot of new specializations ..............
they fear for adulthood
nie in the second hand tylko on the other hand
there are a lot of problem with finding a job
although students study a lof , they don't .............. ( bez but )
making decisions
jakby sie wydawalo - as if it looked like , as it seemed to everybody
fala pesymizmu - the wave of pessimizm is flooding th schools
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