Sprawdzenie speecha

Witam, musze na jutro napisać speecha i nie chciałabym, aby zakradł się w koje tłumaczenie jakiś chochlik, byłabym bardzo wdzieczna, gdyby ktoś mi je sprawdził. Prosze o kontakt na priv :)

wstaw tu do sprawdzenia

On my holiday i was in Sopot. I spent there a really brilliant time with my friends. Every day we walked to the beach and we visited a lot of beautiful places in this city. on The second day weather was really horrible . All day was raining and we couldn't go nowhere but it wasn't the end of bad things. In the evening when i went to the shop i tripped over on the stairs. I felt a terrible pain in my head .I dont remember this well. When i woke up i was again in the flat. Despite that accident it were good holidays because i spent time with important for me people.

np It was raining all day...
I (ja) zawsze z wielkiej litery
on The On the...
with important for me people. hę ;-)

all day it was raining and we couldn't go ANYWHERE, but it wasn't the end of it bad things
it were good the holidays were good
important for me people - zły szyk

Someone can be as important TO me :)

Dziękuje wszystkim za pomoc :)