Witam wszystkich,
Chciałbym prosić o pomoc w sprawdzeniu poprawności gramatycznej zadania które napisałem, standardowo chodziło o napisanie zwyczajnego email-a do koleżanki i rozwinięcie w nim 4 punktów, czasów nie znam perfekcyjnie dlatego będę bardzo wdzięczny za pomoc, pozdrawiam.
"Hi Alice,
Thanks for your email.
Unfortunatelly, i can't accept your invitation, i'd love to visit you, but my parents won't allow me to travel so far abroad on my own, they're worried that i get lost.
Me and my family spend holidays mostly on eating dinner with satan. First we gather around pentagram we drew on the floor with our own blood, then we proceed with the satanic ritual to summon the lord of satan himself. After we are done with sacrifices, we all eat dinner by the table.
It would be lovely if you could come visit me instead, i know your parents trust you enough to let you travel abroad. You could join our feast with Satan, and get to know a little about the afterlife, it will be a loads of fun!
Keep in touch
lots of love,
XYZ.