Czy to jest dobrze napisane? gramatycznie i wgl

Hi everyone!
my name is adrian and This is my first youtube video




At the beginning I would like to say that my English is not perfect, I would say that it is very weak

what I say wrong, write in the comments, maybe youtube will teach me english
I'll come to the point.


what will be on the channel

I will put in videos related to this ..(pokazuje się filmik).. and with this ..(pokazuje się filmik)..

My name is 'adrian' (dlaczego piszesz swoje wlasne imie malymi literami?) and This is my first youtube video
(tutaj trzeba inaczej...(gdy znajdziesz cos) .what I say wrong, write (ale co? trzeba napisac) in the comments, maybe youtube will teach me 'english' (duza litera, nazwa wlasna)