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Prosze o sprawdzenie. Bzdurka taka mala, opowiadania, z ogromna ilosc bledow.:))) Pliss to na jutro .Dziekuje


Sarah is 18 years old. She is A normal adolescent. She like good music and she love going TO THE party. Till now she was learning quite good and she had good relationship with her parents. Once AT THE party she met John. She danced with him all night. They ( WYMIENIL SIE NUMERAMI TELEFONOW). Next day John called to Sarah and ( ZAROSILA JA NA RANDKE). They met very often. ( PO PEWNYM CZASIE STALI SIE PARA).They spent lot of time together and they felt in love.
John have to go to England ( NA KURS JEZYKOWY ) for 3 months. Sarah was unhappy about this but she and John had laptops and the could communicate through the Internet. They talked ( GODZINAMI) and spent all night ( PRZED KOMPUTEREM). In the morning Sarah was so tired and she didn't go to school. It happened incresingly. When her parents found out about her truancys the was angry and anxious. In consequence they pickes up her computer and she didn't have connection with the Internet.
Without it Sarah felt like a fish out of water. She couldn't contact with John and she missed him so. She decided to talk with her parents. She said them, that the Internet id only way to contact wit her boyfriend and she will ( POPRAWI SIE W NAUCE< W SZKOLE). Her partens ( ODDALI ) her the computer but she will always remembere what happened.
eh, jakbym umiala sama bym zrobila :(
jezu
She LIKES good music and LOVES...
Till that time she had quite good marks at school and had good relationship with her parents. Once she met John at the party. They gave their phone numbers to each other. Next day John called to Sarah and asked her out on a date. After some time they were a couple. They... and they FALL in love WITH EACH OTHER. John HAD TO go to England FOR A LANGUAGE COURSE...They spent hours in front of their computers chatting.
...about her TRUANCY THEY WERE... CONSEQUENTLY, they TOOK HER COMPUTER AWAY... connection TO the Internet. Without... missed him so much. She TOLD them that...the Internet was the only way of contacting with her boyfriend. She promised that she would do her best at school. Her parents gave her computer back. Nontheless, she would always remember what happened.
jesus maryja

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