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Jestem uczniem maturalnej klasy liceum i proszę o sprawdzenie mojej rozprwki z limitem słów 2[tel]na temat : "Do we ever really learn from our mistakes?". A tak na marginesie to czy pierwotna postać tej pracy ma 198 wyrazów czy niewszystko się liczy?

"Do we ever really learn from our mistakes?"

42 Humans have been learned to break rules since their creation. Do we know why rules are? Most of rules are made for our security and live in harmony. Why don't adapt to them? Do we ever really learn from our mistakes?
76 Many years ago, people have got the commandment by God and they still haven't observe them. When we see a road signs which tell us 'slow down!', we don't do it and sometimes we move faster. When mother said to a child to don't touch something since it is hot, the child will touch it. We make many mistakes like this and in addition the same mistakes heve been made hundrets years ago.
42 On the other hand, when we go to confession, we allways promise to don't do something. After the crash we drive slower and more safely. Usually, we only once get burnt. It must mean, that we learn something from our mistakes.
38 To crown it all I must compare both sides. Finally, I think, that we really learn from only our mistakes. Unfortunetly, we do not learn from somebody's mistakes and that's why we need learn all the time.
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...been learning to break rules..(ale kogo 'creation' - humans czy rules)
...we know why rules exist?
Most of the rules ... and to live in harmony.
Why don't (ale kto to ma zrobic?) humans?
...people received God"s commandments and they still don't observe them. ...a road sign albo road signs (bez a)
When a mother tells a child not to touch something because it is hot...
...hundreds ...always promise not to do something.
After a crash (the crash to specificzny wypadek) Usually we get burn only once.
...unfortunately
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