sprawdź"letter of complain"!!!:)

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Jeśli ktoś byłby tak miły i mógłby mi sprawdzić ten "letter of complain" to byłabym bardzo wdzięczna;-)

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about the terrible service og your hotel, when I stayed there two weeks ago.
Firstly, a taxi from your hotel should be at the airport at 11 a.m, but was at 12 a.m, and I had to waiting for hour!!!
Secondly, I booked accomodation in a double- room, but I got a single- room.
I made no mention of my order. I ordered a breakfast at 7 a.m, but it was delivered only just at 8:30 a.m.
In addition, the staff were most unhelpful. One member of waitress, who spilt orange juice on my suit.
As you can imagine, I was extremely upset and angry about the whole experience. It is the least luxurious hotel I have ever been, so I expect a refund for my accomodation and an apology from the service of this hotel.
I hope to hear from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours faithfully
Jessica Smith
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about the terrible service oF your hotel, when I stayed there two weeks ago.
Firstly, a taxi from your hotel should be at the airport at 11 a.m, but was at 12 a.m, and I had to waiting for AN / ONE hour!!!
Secondly, I booked ......... a double- room, but I WAS GIVEN a single- room.
I made no mention of my order(
"I made no mention of my order - Nie wiem co to zdanie znaczy"

pewnie internauta chciał napisać: jeszcze nie wspominałem w mojej skardze o zamówieniu-----lepiej by było napisać---- as for to the order I placed,...

but was at 12 a.m----but IT was....

angry about the whole experience ----....about the incident (lepiej brzmi)