Czy to jest dobrze napisane:)

czesc... potrzebuje waszej pomoc... nie ucze sie zbyt dlugo anielskiego- od dwóch miesiecy, bo zmienili mi nagle jezyk...z niemieckiego... Zostalam zmuszona do napisania krotkiej historyjki...

Mike has a new neighbour, Kasia. She is a very nice and helpful girl. Sometimes she was sad and sheded crocodile tears and sometimes she was as keen as a mustard. He known there is something wrong with her , he felt this in his bones, but he just couldn't put his finger on. He decided talk with Kasia. She told him that her mother had gone down with skin's cancer and that it given away, when she went to the doctor, because her skin didn't want to heal. After two months she died. Kasia's father lost his mind and had itchy feet and in desperate he left home and come into the doghouse and the dog went for him and bite him in death.

Dziekuje za pomoc.... Pozdrowienia dla wszystkich czytajacaych tego posta:)

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>Mike has a new neighbour, Kasia. She is a very nice and helpful girl.
>Sometimes she was sad and shedDed crocodile tears [ale to znaczy, ze byla nieszczera! Chyba nie to chcialas napisac] and sometimes she was
>as keen as a mustard. He KNEW there WAs something wrong with her , he
>felt this in his bones, but he just couldn't put his finger on IT. He
>decided TO talk with Kasia. She told him that her mother had skin cancer. She LEARNED ABOUT IT when she went to HER
>doctor, because her skin didn't want to heal. After two months she
>died. Kasia's father lost his mind and in desperatION
>he left home and come into the doghouse [wyjechal z domu i wszedl do budy?] and the dog went for him and
>BIT him TO death.

Troche za duzo przenosni, ale w sumie niezle napisane, tylko uporzadkuj czasy i wyjasnij to, co nie jest jasne

dziekuje bardzo za udzielenie pomoc:)