Witam! Mam ogromną prośbę, proszę o sprawdzenie mojej pracy i ewentualny komentarz :)
temat: Nie ma przekonywujących powodów, by wykorzystywać zwierzęta do doświadczeń medycznych."
The issue of conducting medical research on animals causes a lot of controversies. There are people who believe that it is vital and should be continued. The question is, is it really the necessity? In my opinion, there are no convincing reasons to use animals for medical experiments.
In the first place, it happens very often that animal experimentation is useless and sensless. It is obvious that several experiments do not bring any benefits or simply fail, which means that lots of innocent animals suffer and are killed pointlessly.
Apart from this, there is no need indeed to use animals in the majority of cases. For instance, as far as medical experiments made by students are concerned, there are plenty of alternative ways as multimedia computer programs or professional films that can show the physiology of the living craeatures without using any inhumanae methods.
Nevertheless, there are those who claim that experimentation on animals is not really a problem as animals are only stupid beings which do not think and feel. They forget, however, that they are conscious creatures which can feel pleasure, anger as well as suffer.
All in all, I am absolutely convinced taht there are not any motives for which keeping animals in laboratories, conducting medical research on them and worst of all, killing them would be justified. I also believe that they should simply have right to live.
Miałam problem z dobraniem jakiegos zamiennika do "use" (use animals..),
"experiment", a także nie wiem, czy "indeed" jest użyte gramatycznie poprawnie.
Z góry dziękuję :)