Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie for and against essay

Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
Witam, mam do szkoły napisać rozprawkę na temat "Telewizja- błogosławieństwo czy przekleństwo?" Prosiłabym bardzo o sprawdzenie.

Television is one of the most biggest inventions twenty one century. Meny people can't imagine one day without watching their favourite soup opera, game show or movie. Directors compate in ideas for new films. They patered out (wyczerpać się) all sources and winded up the biggest masterpieces.

To begin wth some good sides of television is her worldwide range. In every country this way of communicate is very popular so information remittance is immediate and whole world know about the last events.

Besides, media are source of knowladge. During watching educatinal channels and programmes we can get to know new cultures, traditions and of course animal live.
In addition, nowadays society is very stressed and busy so often we have not time for reading books. Historical movies based on books give us a chance for getting to know content of book without reading her.

However, media consist not only by educational movies and programmes. We have a tendency watching enertainment films which sometmies have not good influance on our children and on us. Horrors and thillers can teach a child violence and agression. Instead of learning and doing sports they watch cartoones all the tme without restructions. In this situation television have definitely negative influance on childrens behave and self-development.

Furthermore, we should notice how big meaning have reading books. Theyteach us using rich vocabluary, correct writing and mostly develop our imagination. Thanks books we can move in a pleace which about we even do not imagine.

In conclusion, I would like to say that television is necessary source of information. Nevertheless, we should use them in moderation.

Dziękuje z góry :).
.tylko te najwazniejsze -
...*one of the most biggest - one of the biggest
....of the 21st century - nie twenty one
soup - zle - to ma byc soap
compete
remittance - zle - moze transferance
knowledge
during watching - zle - moze While watching..
animal live -zle moze ...see the lives of animals.
...not enough time for reading
...contentS of books
...tendency to watch entertainment....which sometimes do not have..
cartoons ...without restrictions
behaviour
*how big meaning -zle - moze what advantages there are/the importance of
vocabulary
Thanks to books we can escape to places which we could not even imagine
is a necessary source of ....
should use it...