porsze o pomoc!! !!

Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
naprawde bardzo was prosze sprawdzcie mi to plz:


Having devise antibiotics and common vaccinations in half of last century people were
thinking that they are safe and they began to win with microbes. But illusion that in that way people will reign on sicknesses were wronged. The next years showed us how mistake we were done. Microbes in arms race began to win. After the second world war emerged the next, very dangerous infections. Particularly a lot of them was in Africa, Asia and South America. The black continent was birthplace of very deadly illnesses. Definitely the most dangerous illness which emerged in Africa were Ebola. His first epidemics noticed in 1976 in Sudan. But 9 years earlier in German city Marburg entirely deadly virus were noticed. 32 people were came down with and 7 of them were died. It turned out that guilty were vervets form Uganda.
From that time virus were appeared and disappeared in surprising rate leaving behind of him a lot of dead people. WHO declared that the virus form Marburg is more dangerous than Ebola because it killed within 1 year about 400 persons. Ebola killed only 100 persons. And the worst thing were that 2 viruses were intractable. But now world saw a chance. Scientist invented way to neutralize the virus. They want use a “Trojan horse” which is called VSV (pęcherzykowe zapalenie płuc). Scientist let in VSV to the cells of virus and it intercept dominion on him. In order to check action of that method 80 monkeys infected virus Marburg were given VSV or nothing. Monkeys which took nothing died after 3 days but monkeys which took VSV were living 50 days. Scientist are appealing that discovery probably will be effective not only for virus form Marburg but also for HIV and AIDS.
Osobiscie to tylko sprawdzam 'ludzkie' prace.
*The next years showed us how mistakes we were done'
Tutaj 'mistake' to bylo uzycie transatora.
nie rozumiem o co chodzi
Czy naprawde sie przyznajesz, ze sam to wszystko napisales - bo jak tak - to tutaj kazde zdanie jest nie poprawne. Troszeczke za duzo - jak na poprawke -
niesety ja to napisałem ;[

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