"Wakacje za granica" dobrze zaczalem?

Wlasnie pisze rozprawke na nizej podany temat, jednak nie czuje sie az tak swobodnie w jezyku angielkim, w zwiazku z tym prosze powiedzcie mi czy dobrze rozpoczalem moja prace. Jutro napisze reszte - jezeli znajdziesz dla mnie troche czasu, bede Ci bardzo wdzieczny :)

Temat rozprawki: "wakacje za granica"

Have you ever wondered about spending vacation in foreign country? Surely you know that every year more and more people go abroad to holiday. Let us consider some advantages and disadvatages associted with foreign holidays.

1. in A foreign country
2. go abroad ON holiday.
3. Let ME consider
4. associAted with spending holidays abroad.

merytorycznie dobrze :)

>every year more and more people go abroad
every year more and more people ARE goING abroad

certainly :)

Teraz wpisuje kolejny akapit: "advatages"

The most important advantage of foreign holidays is easy way to improve foreign language. Abroad we can learning more easily, because language is around us. Above all conversation with native speakers, billboards in the street, television and many other. Secondly advantage is the fact that we can get to know new culture. Thanks for traveling we educate oneself. Last but not least advantage is possibility to make contact. Connections are very important in modern world.

Nikos -
...advantage of foreign holidays is (lepiej dodaj 'that it is an') easy way to improve (dodaj 'a') foreign language.
Abroad we can learning ('learn' - nie learning) more easily, because ('the') language is around us.
... television and many other (many other - what?). Secondly (lepiej 'second') advantage is ...
Thanks for traveling (travelling) we educate oneself. ('we' i 'oneself'? jak uzywasz 'we' to 'ourselves', jak 'one' to 'oneself').
Last but not least advantage is ('the') possibility to make contactS (lepiej - of making contacts)

Thanks TO traveling... moim zdaniem.

the fact that we can get to know (the) new culture

teraz kolej na "Disadvatages"

The main disadvatage is the fact that a lot of people have prblems with foreign language. Indeed this is main problem which cause many misuderstanding. For example during shopping, in hairdresser or when we simply get lost. Still another disadvatage is the fact that in exotic countries we get sick more often. In result from different climate. Climate could be other disadvantage. Many people cannot stand weather in exotic countries, first of all high temperatures.

TO conclude it seems the exotic travelling could be dangerous , but we have many solutins. Exotic sick - in that instance before exotic travelling we should get vaccinated against sick. Before order travel think of air conditioning system in your hotel. After all, travelling is the probably the best way to educate and improve foreign language, associate with enjoy.

Bardzo bym was prosil drodzy uzytkownicy o sprawdzenie ostatnich dwoch akapitow.
Serdecznie pozdrawiam :)

The main disadvatage is the fact that a lot of people have problems
with A foreign language. Indeed, this is THE main problem which causeS many
misuderstanding. For example during shopping, AT hairdresser or when
we simply get lost. (lepiej bez still) Another disadvatage is the fact that in
TROPICAL countries many people often go down with serious illnesses. It happens as a result of A (?) different
climate, so climate is the next disadvantage. Many people cannot stand THE
weather in tropical countries. I mean mostly the very high temperatures.

poprawilam-
The main disadvatage is the fact that a lot of people have prOblems with 'a' foreign language. Indeed this is 'the' main problem which causeS many misuderstandingS. For example during (lepiej 'when') shopping, in 'a' hairdresser'S or when we simply get lost. Still (niepotrzeba 'still') another disadvatage is the fact that in exotic countries we ('are likely to') get sick ('get sick' to jets b. colloq - lepiej ''feel unwell' albo 'become ill') more often. In ('In' - to jest niepotrzebne.) This resultS from ('being in a') different climate. Climate could be (nie 'be' ale 'have') other disadvantageS. Many people cannot stand 'the' weather in exotic countries, first (nie first, a lepiej 'mainly because') of 'the' all (all jest niepotrzebne) high temperatures.

To conclude, it seems THAT travelling to tropical countries CAN be dangerous , but I can think about some solutins to this problem. In case of illnesses, any traveller who is going to a tropical country should have a vaccination against possible illnesses. Before booking a room he should also think of an air-conditioning in a hotel.
After all, travelling is probably the best way to educate oureselves and to improve foreign languages. Moreover, we have fun at the same time.

no właśnie nie wiedziałam, czy może być "exotic country". W słowniku kolokacji przy "country", "exotic" nie ma, ale już sama nie wiem.

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