bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie :(

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Nie idzie mi najlepiej tworzenie wlasnych tekstow z ang :( zdaje sobie z tego sprawe ze moze byc tu wiele bledow ale prosze o sprawdzenie i ich poprawienie potrzebuje tego na juz praktycznie z gory dziekuje ...
A yearly vacation is important for everyone. I love those days, so carefree and enjoyable.
The first two weeks my summer I spent at camp where I relaxed and meet very new interesting people. Subsequnetly I left for Hajduszoboszlo. There I spent splendid week. Next fortnight I will never forget. Sport camp which for I left was fantastic. The people which I meet become my friends. We go to the gym every morning and play volleyball. In the afternoon we have time for ourself and we were going to the city for the shopping. In the evenings tooked place discos. Sometimes we lit the fire and roasted sausages. One day we took our rucksacacks and go for a long trip.The beauty landscapes and the communion with nature will undoubtedly. Half of the camp I get tonsillitis and I had get back to home. When I had recovered I spent rest of summer with my friends. We were going for the short trip and spent great time together. This my year’s summer I can consider an unusual.
jeszcze raz proszę o sprawdzenie ...
A yearly vacation is important for everyone. I love those days, so carefree and enjoyable.
The first two weeks OF my summer I spent at the camp where I relaxed and met !!!! new and very interesting people. Subsequnetly I left for Hajduszoboszlo. There I spent splendid week. Next fortnight I will never forget. Sport camp which for I left was fantastic (!!>????). The people WHO I've met became my friends. We went to the gym every morning and played volleyball. In the afternoon we had some time for ourselves and we were going to the city for shopping. In the evenings took place discos. Sometimes we lit the fire and roasted sausages. One day we took our rucksacacks and went for a long trip.The beautiful landscapes and the communion with nature will undoubtedly. Half of the camp I got tonsillitis and I had to go back home. The rest time of summer I spent with my friends. We were going for the short trips and spent great time together. This summer I can consider aS unusual.
The people WHO I've met became my friends.rnrnchyba lepiejrnrnI met there people who are my very good friends now
Sport camp which for I left was fantastic (!!>????). w tym zdaniu chodzilo mi o to ze oboz sportowy na ktory wyjechalam byl fantastyczny
I went to a fantastic sport camp
porawie troszeczke:
The first two weeks OF my summer (tutaj brakuje albo holidays albo vacation) I spent at the camp ...SubsequENtly I left for Hajduszoboszlo. There I spent 'A' splendid week. 'THE' next fortnight I will never forget, 'THE' sportS camp which for (tak sie nie mowi - 'which for'- lepiej 'for which') I left was fantastic. ...ourselves and WENT to the city for shopping. 'During the evening we had discos'. Sometimes we lit 'A' fire and roasted sausages. The beautiful
landscapes and the communion with nature will undoubtedly (What? - tutaj cos brakuje). Half of the camp 'AND' I got tonsillitis and I had to go back home. The 'remaining summer time' I spent with my friends. We WENT for (bez 'the') short trips and spent great time together.
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