Prosze o pomoc!!!

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Macie moze jakis pomysł co napisac w opowiadaniu pt " An advanture in foreign country"???? Nie chodzi mi o to zebyscie mi napisali bo chce to sama zrobic tylko o jakis pomysł zebym mogła sobie go rozwinac PRosze!!
Jednak zmiana tematu : " A strange encounter" S[próbowałam cos napisac zaraz przesle prosze o sprawdzenie!!
moje opowiadanie:( nie podoba mi sie zbytnio bo troszke glupi pomysl wcale nie było to takie niezykłe bo brakuje czegos w tym opowiadniu ale sprawdzcie!

I have always benn dreaming of going to britan for my holidays but i did not know anybody who could help me to arrange it.Fortunately, my cousin live in Britan and she invited me.
Next day I buy ticke plan.( Spakowalam waliski-> I was pack siutcase and next week I arrived at the airport, my flight was just being announced. Thah was the finall call. I had my passport chedcked and quikly got on the plan.My plan land at the destination airport.
I did not bleived than I was in London. When I left airport my cousin wait for me. We was happy. Next day we visited a lot of place when we was tired we come back at her home.One day she take me to shopping centre. When we was shopping we notice Beyonce Knowles. She is very popular star, but we did not belive that's she is. we come up to Beyonce and pleas autograps. We spoke with Beyonce and we asked questions. Even though we spoken with stars , we still did not belived. We was very happines and excied.
We never forget this day. Inever thinked than I met Beyonce.
My holidays in London finished and I must left my cousin. However, we always remember about us shopping in centre when met superstar.

Dodajcie cos jak mozecie! BARDO PROSZE!!!
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