Opowiadanko - proszę o sprawdzenie ;)

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When the classroom door opened, everybody went silent. Our English teacher Mrs. Johnson comes into classroom. She always set us a lot of homeworks and for that reason we hadn’t time for any other things. This time we had to write 20 pages essey about our favourite showbussiness star and she save us only Saturday and Sunday to do it. Unfortunately no one of us made it.
While Mrs. Johnson was taking the register we were praying that she forgot about this task. But no, she remembered. ‘Tom read your homework’ said teacher kindly. Tom looked pale and his hands were shaking. ‘We bought a new dog and it ate my homework’ said boy. No one was laughing. Our hearts were pounding faster and faster. A minute later Monika was answering ‘I want to write about Madonna so I had gone to her concert. Next day I felt sick’ Tony said that he had had a terrible headache and toothache as he had been laying for two days in hospital.
Then there was my turn. I didn’t know what to say so I decided pretend faint. While I was fainting I noticed that a chair had stood to close to me. But it was too late. I beat my head in it. This moment broke silent in classroom.
Within seconds I found in school nurse room. On the next day I had big, purple and very painful bruise on my head. It didn’t help my scrimshanked. All class get the worst marks. Now we have even more homeworks then earlier and we have to work harder. However, we know one, lie isn’t a good solution.


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