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Dear Mike!
Na początku napiszę trochę o sobie (jak to przetłumaczyć??)
I live in small city near Olsztyn. I live with my parents and my sister. Her name is Asia and she is 12 years old. My father works as grease monkey and my mother as seller in the shop.
I go to the local school in Olsztyn. I like thise school, but I don't like learning. My favourite subjects are Englisch and German. In my free time I listen to music, play computer or meet with my friends. In the evening I sometimes take my dog, Fafik, for a walk. I love his. I like going swimming vey much, but only when ist hot.
At the moment I'm studing biology, because i have exams soon.


Czekam na Twoją odpowiedź (tego tez nie wiem:/)

Best wishes

Milena