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I would like to live in a beautifull and big villa. The house of my dreams is surounded by huge garden and behind the house there is a swimming pool.

Inside the house there is a spacious hall and the stairs. There is a big kitchen with the lot off modern and expensive kitchen stuff . Dining room is next of the kitchen and there is a very huge table, and there are many chairs. All the room is decorate with flovers and orginals paintings on the walls. Oposite the dining room there is a spacious living room with a huge windows and the door to the garden. This room is very spacious and bright. There is a very comfortable sofa, 3 armachairs, orginal coffeetable and anormous an very expensive TV set. In this villa is a 4 bathrooms and 4 bedroooms but my is the bigest one. My bedroom is on the first floor in front of the stairs. This room is very cosy an tastefull with the balcony. There is the anormous bed, small sofa and a chest of drowers. There is also a big wordrabe for my slothes. Next to my bedroom there is mY private bathroom with the bath, schower and jacuzzi. A front of bedroom there is a small stady. There is a lot of books and my compyter.....

I very like a spacious places, because in my house don't be a lot of furniture.

Czy mógłby mi ktos sprawdizc te pracę !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bardoz prosze:) :PP

The house of my
>dreams is surounded by huge garden and behind the house there is a
>swimming pool.

W tym zdaniu brakuje jednego article.

There is a
>big kitchen with the lot off modern and expensive kitchen stuff .

Nie ma czegoś takiego jak "the lot off"

>Dining room is next of the kitchen

Nie "next of" tylko "next to"

> there is a very huge table

"very huge" to masło maślane


>All the room is decorate

tutaj potrzeba past participle od "decorate"

In this villa is a 4 bathrooms and 4 bedroooms but my is the
>bigest one.

4 bathrooms and 4 bedrooms to liczba mnoga więc nie "is" tylko "there are". Liczby napisz słownie.

my bedroom, ale jak bez bedroom, to "mine"


There is a lot of books and my compyter.....

a lot of books and my computer to liczba mnoga więc "there are"

>I very like a spacious places

spacious places to liczba mnoga; "a" niepotrzebne.

nie mówi się "very like" tylko np. I like dogs very much.

Kilka literówek.

I would like to live in a beautiful and big villa. The house of my dreams is surounded by a huge garden and there is a swimming pool behind the house.

There is a spacious hall and stairs inside the house. There is a big kitchen with a lot of modern and expensive kitchen stuff . Dining room is next to the kitchen and there is a huge table and many chairs. All the room is decorated with flowers and there are orginals paintings on the walls. Oposite the dining room there is a spacious living room with huge windows and a door to the garden. This room is very spacious and bright. There is a very comfortable sofa, 3 armachairs, orginal coffeetable and very expensive TV set. In this villa there are 4 bathrooms and 4 bedroooms but mine is the biggest one. My bedroom is on the first floor in front of stairs. This room is very cosy an tasteful with the balcony. There is an anormous bed, small sofa and a chest of drowers. There is also a big wardrobe for my clothes. There is my private bathroom with the bath, shower and jacuzzi next to my bedroom. At the front of bedroom there is a small stady(library chyba). There are a lot of books and my computer.....

I like spacious places very much, because there are not many furniture in my house.
Jakos tam;]

...beautiful and 'big' villa.
..expensive kitchen 'stuff' (to znaczy co?)
..there are orginals (bez 's' in original) paintings on the walls.
Oposite (Sprawdz jak to slowo sie pisze) the dining room..
...3 armachairs (sprawdz jak to slowo sie pisze)
..and A very expensive TV set.
..first floor in front of THE stairs.
...cosy anD tasteful with A balcony.
...There is an anormous (sprawdz jak to slowo sie pisze) bed...
and a chest of 'drowers' (sprawdz to slowo)
...there is a small stUDY.
...because there 'are' not 'many' (popraw 'are' i 'many') furniture in my..