proszę o poprawkę ! short !

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Cześć ! Bardzo proszę popraw mi błędy jeśli je widzisz !

We meet him as a young man, who after the Great War holds to move on to the East and starts to work as a stock broker. He is looking for the new place of residence. A young colleague proposes him a common rent hause beside the city. The firm sends him to the Washington and Todd relocates thete alone. That West Allin is the place of meeting Todd and Alan later.

Dziękuję !
Pliiissss pomóźcie !
Kochani błagam pomóżcie mi ! To dla mnie takie ważne...
Jest tutaj jeszcze ktoś prócz mnie ?!
>We meet him as a young man, who after the Great War holds to move [co znaczy holds to move? decides to move] to the East and starts to work as a stock broker. He is looking for SOMEWHERE TO LIVE. A young colleague OFFERS him ACCOMMODATION IN A HOUSE NOT FAR FROM THE CITY WHERE THEY WOULD LIVE TOGETHER AND SHARE THE RENT. The firm [LEPIEJ: HIS COMPANY] sends him to Washington and
>Todd relocates theRe alone. That West Allin [DLACZEGO 'THAT'? CO TO MA ZNACZYC?] is the place WHERE Todd and Alan MEET later.