Dear Mr Grant ,
>I saw your advertisement for a TOURIST GUIDES in the Daily Newspaper
>and I would like to apply for the position of TOURIST GUIDES , because
>I think that it would be perfect job for me. (tak bym napislala ja)
>I am (mowiac o wieku uzywasz czasownika to be!!!) 25 years old, I studied tourism and now I study philology
>of English at Oxford University to minor. (nie wiem co mialas na mysli piszac minor, opuscialbym to)
>I am an advanced learner of English ,German and Russian.
>I have got good communication and interpersonal skills and I am ready to work hard. I am talktive
>, outgoing (nie wiem czy to dobrze rekomendowac sie takimi cechami do przyszlego pracodawcy:)) friendly, ambitious and determined.
>I have been living in London, so I know my city very well ( nie wiem po co te informacje, bo nie wiem czy to istotne w tym liscie) and I have worked in travel agency for
>two years .
>I am enclosing my curriculum vitae and colour photo .
>I am looking forward to hearings from you .
>
>
>Your sincevely ,
>
Jest juz troszke pozno, ale chyba nie przeoczylam niczego waznego:) Pozdrawiam:)