Klaudyna, you haven't read our earlier posts in your last topic, have you?
This estate is unusual because ‘people living together’ [in my opinion it is incorrect, I would change it]. ‘Everything it is common’ [this sentence makes no sense]. ‘People cook for families not only but for all inhabitants’ [it is also incorrect, in sentences like this, with ‘not only’ we use inversion]. ‘Children live and study together in a different building’ [first of all, ‘building’ is singular; it would be better, if you used plural form in this context; secondly, in my view ‘in a different building’ denies ‘children live and study together’, it just makes no sense]. I think that the estate is a good idea for ‘salitary’ [there is no word ‘salitary’ in English language, did you mean ‘solitary’? anyway, I am not sure whether it is proper word] people and ‘young children’ [you could also use ‘(the) youth’; ‘young children’ sound a bit odd]. ‘Solitary’ [as above] people ‘can to meet’ [as I have said before, after modal verbs we prefer to use bare infinitive (be) rather than full infinitive (to be)] other people who have ‘curious’ [I do not think it is the word you need in this context, maybe ‘similar’?] ‘hobby’ [if I were you, I should use plural form] and interests.
However, [comma] children ‘learn in groups live’ [how to live in group]. They play together and ‘learn world’ [it makes no sense]. Children like having meals together with their friends. I would live in this estate because I can meet new friends with interesting ‘hobbys’ [‘hobbys’ is incorrect; plural form of ‘hobby’ is ‘hobbies’]. Peoples help ‘mutually’ [I would use ‘each other’].
Moreover, I am not sure whether word ‘estate’ is used properly. According to my dictionary (Collins COBUILD Advanced Learner’s English Dictionary), an ‘estate’ is –
1. a large area of land in the country which is owned by a person, family, or organisation;
2. a word referring to a housing estate or and an industrial estate, used mainly in BrE;
3. all the money and property that someone leave behind them when they die, used mainly in legal documents, in law courts, and by police in official situations;